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Thank you so much for the advice! I decided that I’ll rewrite the script using most of the tips you gave me, specifically:
Adding more personality. Giving my character a name. Writing the script in present tense (if I understood you correctly) Adding details that the viewer can’t see as opposed to what they can see
I am writing the script to entertain people, not so much for myself. I don’t have an inane desire to write, but I do have an inane desire to entertain people. I feel as though let’s plays are too done, and I need to try something new.
Do I have any writing skill, or am I more or less wasting my time here?
Today’s game is Barony. A friend gifted it to me since it’s on sale (and both the DLCs). I ended up making a Succubus Rogue named Olive who I intended to be a very normal person. None of the usual Succubus tropes, complete subversion. Somehow my friend ended up taking the Tropes instead somehow as the Autmatron, and he named...
I'm not much of a creative writer, but I'm currently trying to make a creative narrative around my FIRST Elder Scrolls Oblivion playthrough. (youtu.be)
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I played Lovecraftian doctor simulator Do No Harm, and let me tell you, my brother in Cthulhu, I did some serious harm (www.pcgamer.com) angielski
Day 346 of posting a Daily Screenshot from the games I've been playing angielski
Today’s game is Barony. A friend gifted it to me since it’s on sale (and both the DLCs). I ended up making a Succubus Rogue named Olive who I intended to be a very normal person. None of the usual Succubus tropes, complete subversion. Somehow my friend ended up taking the Tropes instead somehow as the Autmatron, and he named...
RoadCraft early review gameplay dropped on Youtube (www.youtube.com)
According to SD1One’s video (not the one I linked), driving mechanics are simplified (no collision, winch only on scout vehicles, no fuel)....